I’m not satisfied with this. The movement is entirely too fast, too robotic, and there are few enough subtleties to make it look very unnatural. Her expressions feel extremely flat. I really liked the beginning pose, and it could have been great had I put enough time into it.

  • Left leg quick jolting
  • Great movement
  • Nice coffee
  • Nice facial expression
  • Odd bend in neck at the end
  • Left leg stutters really quickly. Looks weird
  • Nice pose
  • Shoulder motion near end seems odd
  • Back leg needs more easing applied
  • When shoulders go down, arms shift rather than naturally bending against the table and face
  • Neck seems unnaturally bent at the end

About barberne

an animation student at alfred state from rochester
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