Waiting

I’m not satisfied with this. The movement is entirely too fast, too robotic, and there are few enough subtleties to make it look very unnatural. Her expressions feel extremely flat. I really liked the beginning pose, and it could have been great had I put enough time into it.

  • Left leg quick jolting
  • Great movement
  • Nice coffee
  • Nice facial expression
  • Odd bend in neck at the end
  • Left leg stutters really quickly. Looks weird
  • Nice pose
  • Shoulder motion near end seems odd
  • Back leg needs more easing applied
  • When shoulders go down, arms shift rather than naturally bending against the table and face
  • Neck seems unnaturally bent at the end
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About barberne

an animation student at alfred state from rochester
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